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16:23p.m.

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Trials English SPM 2011 ; Section B Essay

FAMILY

By : Adibah Shahrum
Marks obtained: 35/50 
A fiction story :'(

          It was a quiet night in the month of October. The night was calm but the situation in the hospital was not as calm as the foggy night outside. In the hospital, a voice of a pretty young lady was screaming with pain was filling the mist. She was huffing and puffing. She was using all her energy and finally, she managed to give birth to a baby. :)

          "Congratulations, Mr. Lee! It is a baby girl,said the doctor" to Anna's husband. He slowly cradled the baby and put her on Anna's lap. tears streamed down on Anna's cheek. She finally gave birth to a baby after seven years of marriage. Robert Lee put his arms around his wife and said, "I promised to take care of this baby and you from cradle t the grave," he said. "I would love her as much as I love you," added Mr. Lee.

Robert assured his wife and made a promise to her. Anna held the baby with cautious and slowly, she kissed her baby's forehead. It was a red-letter day for both the couple.

          Months passed after Anna had given birth to Fleur and evceryday was a happy day. Robert was very supportive. He purchased many toys for Fleur. From dresses, socks and mittens, he buys them all for hos daughter. He spoilt his daughter really bad. However, not all good things last right?

          Fleur was then a toddler when an incident occurred. At that time, Anna was playing with Fleur in the garden at that the back of the house. The garden was a beautiful place as it was filled with green plants, flowers and butterflies. It always excites Anna whenever she caught her daughter, Fleur staring at the trees and swaying them with her curious big eyes. One day, the house telephone suddenly ran, Anna went into the house to answer the call. However, Fleur was left behing alone in the garden. Fleur saw a cat and she got excited even more when she saw the cat ran behind the bushed. Fleur followed the cat and it actually led Fleur to a small well. The cat jumped over the well. PANIC STATIONS! Fleur followed the cat's actions and she consequently fell into the well.  

          When Anna was done, she went back to the garden, she was so panicked as her daughter was no where to be seen. She searched with all her might until she heard a crying sound. She listened properly, retracing the crying source. It was from the well! Anna ran to her neighbour;s house to get help.

          "WHY DID YOU LEAVE HER ALONE IN THE GARDEN?" Robert screamed to Anna with his arms crossed. Robert and Anna were now in the hospital. They were both waiting for the doctor for their daughter's health result.

          "I was answering the phone. I thought it would be alright just to leave her out of my sight for a second" said Anna sobbingly. 

          "Ahem. Sorry to interrupt your conversation but I am here to tell you the result on Fleur's health, said the doctor. The doctor stood calmly with a board clip against his chest. 

          "I'm sorry to inform you but your child is having difficulties in hearing. Nevertheless, her body is still in fighting fit,"said the doctor calmly.

          "You mean...She is deaf?!!! asked Robert.

          "In other words, yes." The look in the doctor's eyes and the facial expression of the doctor answered all the couple's questions. Anna could not take the fact that her only beloved daughter is deaf. As a result, she fainted. 

          Months passed. Feelings faded. Weather changed. Even people changed. Anna began arguing with her husband nearly every night. Their arguements were very frequent even though their child was standing right in front of them watching them argue. Robert often blamed Anna as the reason why their daughter Fleur is deaf. One night, after all the fights and arguements, Robert packed up all his things and he decided to move out from the house. He decided to leave his wife and his daughter behind. He could no longer withstand Anna's behaviour. The truth was, Robert has another woman in the outside world. Anna's life was totally ruined. She thought of commiting suicide when Fleur came and she covered her mother with a small blanket and she hugged her mother. Anna then reminded herself of all those halcyon days. She squeezed her daughter back tightly in her arms and she reassured to herself that she still do have a family even though her husband left for le cherchez famme. 

17:00p.m.

Let It Rain Over Me 

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